My trait is smart and sensitive. My crime is poisoning.
One month ago in our school, a student
James has been killed. The criminal is a young student named Duncan who majoring
in chemistry in college. Duncan is James’s roommate. Duncan got NDMA which is virulent
from chemistry lab and threw it in James’s bottle when James had classes. James
didn’t realize it and drink water from bottle after he came back. James felt
uncomfortable and died two days later.
The reason why Duncan would kill James is
that they have an argument about some little things. James used some rude words
and made Duncan angry. Duncan is clever and he thought too much. He thought there
are might something bad would happen. So he decided to kill James first.
Because he is clever, he found that there are some NDMA in chemistry lab that
not be controlled well. He steeled some poison and killed James.
①This article is written in the 3rd person, report the event well.
回复删除②Duncan is a smart man but a smart mind makes him think too much things and he is also a sensitive man who would react to something bad strongly.
③Duncan killed his roommate by poisoning. Why there is not other relationships between Duncan and James?
④the article tells the reason indetail.
⑤Duncan in article is a mean and mad man but real Duncan is a kind person.
⑥the character is a mean and mad person.
Duncan wrote his crime as a report. He analyses himself as a clever person. The writing style is brief. And he told the event first and then was the reason.
回复删除Duncan identifies about himself as a smart and sensitive person. This kind of person can always be a talent.
Duncan imagines he killed his roommate by NDMA. He got NDMA which is virulent from chemistry lab and threw it in James’s bottle when James had classes. This kind of murder shows the killer had high education.
Duncan committed his crime that he had an argument with his roommate about some little things. The roommate used some rude words and made Duncan angry. Duncan thought there are might something bad would happen and decided to kill.
A clever person can always keep sense. In the article, Duncan is more like sensitive.
I think the character is knowledgeable but do not have a good judgement.
----Alex